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I'm so scared.

I should have listened to them… I should have been a good little girl like all of the other kids living in Lacunosa Town with me and went home. No one can protect me now. I haven't moved an inch. It's so cold… My tears are frozen. But why am I crying? Tears won't do me any good. IT doesn't care. IT still wants my skin. I'm probably gonna die in a few minutes if it decides to move.

Mommy and Daddy told me never to go there, to that big scary hole in the back of the city. People told me that there was a monster from outer space living there, and that bad things would happen to me if I ever went there. I could never go outside at night, because the scary monster would find little kids like me and take them away for its dinner.

But I wasn't scared by the story; I didn't even believe it.

I thought that I was a brave girl; I always told everyone that I wasn't scared of anything, that I c-could stand up to any stupid ol' monster. I thought that I wasn't afraid of monsters. So guess what I did?

I went to the hole, even though I wasn't supposed to. I lied to mommy and daddy, saying that I was going to play at route 13. B-but… I was gonna come back, honest! I was gonna come home, and everyone would say how brave I was, and, and, how I did what no one else in Lacunosa could, h-how I was the bravest little girl in the whole entire world…

But they'll never say any of those things to me. They won't see me again. Ever. I'm not a brave little girl; I'm a stupid little girl. So stupid stupid stupid…

I'm just gonna say this… I didn't know what everyone was so worried about when I first got there. It looked like a regular old cave.

This is what everyone was scared of? Lame.

I got out from another side, seeing a whole bunch of grass and ledges everywhere. I didn't see ANY Pokémon there.

Don't tell me THEY'RE scared too? I don't even see any monster around, and it's too quiet here for there to even be any.

I spent all day looking for someone else. I was getting lonely and wanted someone to play with. It was getting dark outside, but I didn't even notice because the place was starting to make me mad. Where was a supposed to go in this place?! Was there anything interesting here? I came to a dead end, being stopped by a small pond.

Maybe I should go home and let everyone know how silly everyone was, being scared of a boring place like this…

KYUUUUUUUUU…

I stopped right where I was, my heart beating super fast. The night sky turned darker with clouds, and it started… Snowing? But why? Everyone knows that it doesn't snow in June. Soon, I couldn't see anything, no ledges, no grass, nothing, because they were all covered by snow. I started shivering; not only because I was wearing a short -sleeved shirt and shorts in the middle of a blizzard, but because of the roar that came right before it started snowing. What was that? Was it…

OH NO! IT'S NIGHT TIME!

The monster was coming out, I just knew it was. I looked around quickly for some place to hide, and I saw another cave entrance upward. I had my arms around me, and ran there, not thinking about what might be there.

It was just as cold in the cave. AND IT STILL IS.

I was glad that my feet weren't in the snow anymore, and I closed my eyes in relief…

Kyyyuuuuu…

My eyes snapped back open WIDE, and I slowly turned around. It was right behind me. The monster. It was grey, had a long neck, and had scary yellow eyes and sharp teeth coming out from its… Mask or something, I don't even know, it was huge, a trillion times bigger than me, and had wings with super sharp icicle things on them. It was scarier than I thought it would be. I backed away very slowly, but it followed me onto a corner on top of a flat rock with a pond behind it.

And get this… All this just happened about five minutes ago.

I'm still on the rock, very cold, and very scared, and the monster is still staring at me, making creepy noises at me. It wants to eat me like it does everyone else stupid enough to go here, even when their mommies and daddies told them not to. They're probably out looking for me right now, but I know they aren't coming here.
It's coming a step closer to me every five minutes, I can feel it… Soon it'll be the end of little me. But I deserve this.

Mommy and Daddy, I'm so sorry for not listening…

For not being the good little girl I was supposed to be.
Another in-world story revolving around the legendary Pokemon Kyurem.

In Pokemon Black and White, when you reach Lacunosa Town, people there go inside at night because of Kyurem, the "monster" the people talk about, who, according to some, would kidnap people and Pokemon to eat them.

Yeah, I found that kinda creepy, so I decided to write about it, ASSUMING IT WAS TRUE, I doubt it is.

For those who don't know about the Pokemon Kyurem, see its Bulbapedia entry here: [link](Pok%C3%A9mon)

EDIT: Wow, I'm actually shocked that this got as many favorites as it did. Thanks, all!

Note: Pokemon belongs to Nintendo.
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:iconthetransformicegirl:
TheTransformiceGirl Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
How can it eat people if its mouth is frozen shut? O_O
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JakeLeeGT Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
When I went to the Giant Chasm,caught Kyurem and returned to Lacunosa Town,I looked back and said: "Now everyone can come to this place whenever they want." then I looked at the master ball I used to catch Kyurem and said: "And you don't need to be a monster anymore,Kyurem.Now you can be a hero."
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BrokenArceus Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dude i did the same thing sept i didn't use master ball.I only use dat thing on arceus
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JakeLeeGT Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014
Ok.
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blackkyurem1000 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014
I LOVE IT! BUT NOT TO OFFEND OR AYTHING BUT DON'T YOU KNOW KYUREM CAN'T OPEN IT'S MOUTH? I'M CURRENTLY MAKING A COMIC OF MY OWN MADE UP LEGENDARY POKEMON CREATED 4 A GOOD PURPOSE BUT ESCAPED WHEN IT WASN'T FULLY MADE YET, APPEARING TO BE ZOMBIE LIKE AND URGED KYUREM TO GIVE UP THE DNA SPLICER TO HEAL. I'LL MAKEIT THE STORY SO YOU'LL KNOW WHT I'M TALKING ABOUT,
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chillypeper Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013
KENNY WHAT I TELL U ABOUT EATIN PEOPLE!??!?(kenny is my kyurem)
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LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Teehee! I like that name! It make him seem less...scary? Meh I'm not really thinking of the right words right now
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:iconbrokenarceus:
BrokenArceus Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
cute name!
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Darkbowser1 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
Awesome!
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MJMSTUDIOS2020 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
What's interesting is this COULD be similar to JD or Beast of Bray Road. Either or neither, I liked your story ,a lot, .
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Terry-Kyurem Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
WHAT I TELL Y'ALL ABOUT COMIN' IN MY CHASM!?

I'm gonna type a song for you!

And I'm gonna show ya a thing or two!

So just have a seat my friend, and if it's all the same....just sit back, and relax...

WHILE I FREEZE YOUR BRAINS!

NA NA NA LOVELY FREEZING!

FRE-FRE-FREEZE!

NA NA NA LOVELY FREEZING!
NA NA NA LOVELY FREEZING!
NA NA NA LOVELY FREEZING!
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:iconthetransformicegirl:
TheTransformiceGirl Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Did you get that off the Fluttershy MOV thing? xD
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:iconbrokenarceus:
BrokenArceus Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dude u rlly needa make it creepier.U couldn't scare a flippin magikarp with that song
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LemonNewom Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
HAHA XD LOVE THAT REFERENCE 
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steelthescyther4 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
:iconclapplz:
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drose444 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool story. What's happens next.
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DarkCyloGriffon Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Om nom noms.
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Overlander-X Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Despite the ferocity of Kyurem and having powers and body as cold as it does, I beleive Kyurem still has quite the noble heart, like when it fought Keldeo in the movie and spared him when the little guy submitted to defeat, saying, "You could have still fought me and pursued victory, instead you chose to take my attack to save your friends. You have quite the sword, young one."

If anything, its probably the start of a bigger story, filled with adventure, good times, silly times... but also some hard times, cuz ya gotta take the good with the bad.
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BrokenArceus Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ya i agree with ur point uv view.
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57238 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
Make seconde part plz
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reshiram11 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
In the Black and White 2 game they say it's just a legend
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Mewtwohybridgirl Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This stories sad :(
But well written too. You did a good job, ChertheSketcher. :D
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Emo-cam Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
I like to think the little girl became friends with Kyurem
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CatGengar Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
I do, too, but unfortunately, I don't think that's what happened... :(
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Emo-cam Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
And later that girl grew up, beat the elite four became the champion, and caught Kyurem. That girl was named White.
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CatGengar Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
That does make for an interesting story, but I think this story was supposed to be a creepypasta anyways.
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Emo-cam Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
Yeah, but I like Kyurem
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CatGengar Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013
So do I. Him and Giratina should just be friends together or something, 'cause I imagine they're both pretty lonely sometimes...
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:iconbrokenarceus:
BrokenArceus Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ya lol.Giratina is better solo.His story wuz moar heartbreaking however stupid that sounds
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CatGengar Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014
Ok then...
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13smallr Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
dragonyell :star:
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13smallr Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
make another part to this story! I want to know what happens to the girl.
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:iconbrokenarceus:
BrokenArceus Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I know what happenz she dies!
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iamcreepinonyou Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
your stories are amazing
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Caroline1539 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is cool.
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TyTyPokemonFreak Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012
This is so cool
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skyquazatheairrider Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
What nobody knows is that Kyurem just wants a friend. But they die of heart attack almost instantly. :3
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JamesTheLitwik Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
I cought Kyurem yesterday =D :sun:
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:iconmutitus:
Mutitus Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Professional Writer
Bravo; yet another piece of proof that Kyurem is truly a beast to be feared, if not alone for its capacity to reach absolute zero.
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KestrelStarYT Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Kyurem, plz don't! :icondragonyell:
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DarkCaptainJules Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student General Artist
AMAZING IT ACTUALLY SENT A SHIVER DOWN MY SPINE!!!
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Wingoftoxin Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg kyurem is one of my favorite pokemon ever! you did a super great job on this ^^
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PKMNTrainerFixc Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012
Thank you for making this. Kyurem's a FREAKING ZOMBIE DRAGON.
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Kinglorshi Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Student Writer
Knock it offff, Kyurem's not evil. :D

Not to be annoying either, but there were a few grammar mistakes.

Overall though, nice change of pace from what I usually see! Good work!
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ChertheSketcher Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
Heh, I know, but what can I say XD

And no, not annoying, in fact, could you point them out for me so that I can fix them?

Thank you :heart:
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Kinglorshi Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Student Writer
They are very minor mistakes, such as:

I don't see any Monster around.

(Unless you meant: I can't see a single monster, but whatever)

I guess only one, but that's a good thing. :)

Only real complain is why she would seek someone else to play with if she went to a place that's meant to be forbidden, but alas. I like it.
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13TheDeath Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OH GOSH

i LOVE Kyurem's backstory of Lacunosa, a big, outer space, zombie dragon freezing everything, kidnapping humans and pokémon to devour them

i approve this, i wanted to make a creepy story too about that
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DoubleHaloProduction Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And for those of you that don't know Kyurem's new forms, go to this link

[link]
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glenn-nicole-willson Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
luv this story I can just picture it in my head loooove it so much its got almost everything shes mad brave angry and scared to much to love about this story wat really cautght my eye was the title I was like oh let me see this right here!!!!!!
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DarkCaptainJules Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Same here
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